Do you have a blog on internet? Do you share personal information with the entire world? Are you interested in meeting new people or making new friends? Humans are constantly in communication and we usually talk about ourselves with other people. I would like to share some information about me in order for you to know who I am, what I like and what I don’t, and things I like to do, just like we always do it in a personal web page.
The first thing you should know about me is that my name is Mario, but some people call me wize, and I’m 21 years old. I’m living in Aguascalientes, Mexico and nowadays I’m studying ELT in UAA. Physically I’m a tall guy and very slim, people say me I should eat more to gain weight but I am not worried about that. I had brown eyes, a small mouth and a kind of big nose. I hate my hair because it isn’t lank but it isn’t curly, a kind of kinky so it is really hard to comb. In general I think I’m not a handsome guy but I don’t think I am ugly, I think I’m just another normal guy.
Now you should know some things I like and dislike. Music is one thing that I love; I like to listen to different kinds of music like rock, punk, hardcore, hip hop, pop, ska and many others styles. Some of my favorite bands are Green day, Nirvana, My chemical romance, Blink 182, Offspring, Zoe, Panic at the disco, etc. On the other hand I hate children’s music and duranguenze style; however, I respect people who like it. Talking about food I like potatoes, pizza, chicken and Chinese food but I don’t like beans, avocado, onion and some dishes of Mexican food. My favorite dessert is vanilla flan but I hate chocolate brownies.
Finally I would like to share some things I like to do. Music is very important for me, so I enjoy a lot to go to concerts and see band shows, I think there are many bands with a lot of talent but they need more support. Another thing related to music that I like to do is playing the drums, I took some lessons years ago but I have to practice more. I also like to go out with my friends to parties, concerts, etc. Sometimes I like to be alone in my room reading or just listening music.
In conclusion I think I’m just another person in this world that likes to share some personal information with other people. I think that talking about ourselves is important because many people just take importance on the first impression or the people's appereance but they don't know more about the likes or feelings, and they could have a wrong impression. Now, I hope you have a good impression about me, if not I don’t really care too much.
7 de septiembre de 2010 a las 19:57
hi..wize!!
it is an interesting essay, i did not know some aspects about you. I think you wrote an excellent introductory essay, because it makes sense, you were linking very well the paragraphs.One aspect that I noticed, it is that you use contractions, and remember that you have to aviod them. You did a great job, i really enjoy reading it.
see you!